Hmm...
I like it, I feel the backround beat had a 90's beat.
It sounded alot like my music.(beat wise I always use same drum and hi hat beat)
All that was missing was a clap.
Kick clap kick clap.
Hi ht hi ht hi ht hi ht
Pretty good.
Hmm...
I like it, I feel the backround beat had a 90's beat.
It sounded alot like my music.(beat wise I always use same drum and hi hat beat)
All that was missing was a clap.
Kick clap kick clap.
Hi ht hi ht hi ht hi ht
Pretty good.
Meh, I felt this song didn't need a clap. I actually prefer snares to claps, now. They have a harder cleaner sound. ^_^
I usually dont like rap, but this is good.
I liked the beat alot. Seemed on par with professional music. I like the backround hi pitch noise to.
Dude
Dude wtf seriously. Is this a joke? So horrible.
Thanks, I'll work on that. I'll add that to my next one
I agree...
Missing a climax.
agreed, I didn't spend much time on this one, only a couple hours.
Hmm.
I mean, it sounds alright. But so boring. I mean Idk, I guess it had a touch of emotions in it. But it was still a little off.
I think a very soft kick, and soft snare/hit hat would do the trick......
I think it would sound wonderful and emotional then.
1:35 reverbkick- Kick clap kick clap kick clap with a hi hat in there.
Well...
This song would be about 3x better if your vocals actually sounded serious. They are monotone no feeling at all. If you can fix that this would be a very good song. The chourus should not be changed sound wise. Leave it the same. Just learn to sing it different.
Basically I wanted it to be mono, because of the feeling of the song. Dark. You know? I dont know it's just the way I imagined it, thanks for the feedback anyways.
collab?
I wana redo this. Collab? if interested im g4ebguy on Skype.
SINGING!!!!!!!!!!!
Dude that is like horrible. U really need to practice more. It has no EMOTION at all. Take this as constructive critisim
How about the other parts of the song? I already said I'm not that good at singing and I'm doing more vocal takes. XD
Your review doesn't really help with anything constructive.
not bad....
3:05 is were it took off, it took a long time, maybe in your next song u can make it closer to the beginning and use some reverb effects.
O yeh
Thats what Im talking about right there. Thats perfection.
Thanks bro.
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