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Honestly i have no idea why, but the sounds in the beginning and also through out the song don't seem to match BPM together. Might just be me. Middle sounds ok.

Its alright, but still sounds a bit beginner-intermediate. Just keep going at it. The melody needs to change a bit, make it more appealing, id replace it with a saw instead of that bell sound.

eyramusic responds:

No, In the song it's the same BPM.

I Disagree The Glass Bell sound is awsome! (your opinion may differ from mine!) it does sound a bit beginner but what can you do! it's finished i've (and ediblefungus ) spent enough time on it!

Hey, What you think your doing around here.. club music is my territory. j/k.

But yeh sounds good. Yes is repetitive. I think a bit more vocals would be nice.

The beginning for a bit boring waiting for the actual start of the song. So maybe try to shorten it a bit. Ive made the mistake to on my song density of passion. 1:45 the clap and kick, I think it should be harder. More crisp. The dubstep was alright. For a start you know.

If your interested in a collab I would just rework the drums, snare,clap etc etc. Then You could upload that or me. MEssage me if interested. 4/5.

DeathCross555 responds:

Thanks for the info! I'll think about the Collab, but I'm back to a small break in my music writing. I've hit a writers block currently, so a collaboration may help, but I can't be quite sure of it yet. I'm still a newbie, and my mastering really sucks right now. Still, I appreciate the info! It's a lot more than what I HAVE been getting! I'm much better at the beats and the drums than I am at the melodies and the synthetics.

Its missing a couple things.

The kick needs to be louder, the clap sound should be louder and echoed. And why did you increase the speed at the end???

Zeck2709 responds:

I honestly don't know

The soft drums sound amazing. If it had a piano for the melody I bet it would sound like something from ww2.

VGSongbird responds:

^_^

00:20 more bass. Heavy kick. 00:30 is very high. Maybe turn it down 10% or so. The clap lacks a bit of.. crisp. But its not to bad. 2:20 on that snare please add a really nice echo effect. Will do wondors.

Man nice job again, hey I want to learn the ways of dubstep, I have thee most trouble with it. Tutor me? Got a skype ? P.M. me. Thanks.

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