not bad but not exciting
Enough said. Try spicing it up a bit.
not bad but not exciting
Enough said. Try spicing it up a bit.
Thanks, I was looking for more of a mellow and relaxing tune in this one.
hmmm
Sounds good. But the whole time, I wanted to just take control of it, and add some nice realistic sounding kicks, hi hats, cymbals and snares. If interested Id collab and do it for you.
Thats a good idea. I'll see what i can do
Hmm...
I like it, I feel the backround beat had a 90's beat.
It sounded alot like my music.(beat wise I always use same drum and hi hat beat)
All that was missing was a clap.
Kick clap kick clap.
Hi ht hi ht hi ht hi ht
Pretty good.
Meh, I felt this song didn't need a clap. I actually prefer snares to claps, now. They have a harder cleaner sound. ^_^
Dude
Dude wtf seriously. Is this a joke? So horrible.
Thanks, I'll work on that. I'll add that to my next one
I agree...
Missing a climax.
agreed, I didn't spend much time on this one, only a couple hours.
Well...
This song would be about 3x better if your vocals actually sounded serious. They are monotone no feeling at all. If you can fix that this would be a very good song. The chourus should not be changed sound wise. Leave it the same. Just learn to sing it different.
Basically I wanted it to be mono, because of the feeling of the song. Dark. You know? I dont know it's just the way I imagined it, thanks for the feedback anyways.
SINGING!!!!!!!!!!!
Dude that is like horrible. U really need to practice more. It has no EMOTION at all. Take this as constructive critisim
How about the other parts of the song? I already said I'm not that good at singing and I'm doing more vocal takes. XD
Your review doesn't really help with anything constructive.
O yeh
Thats what Im talking about right there. Thats perfection.
Thanks bro.
Nice
I liked it alot bro.
Thanks bro.
Very nice
I really like the soft beginning. Effects are decent. I think some way deeper/louder bass would go better with the loud clap. Not bad at all.
I'll try and play around with it, but yeah, thanks for the suggestion.
I'm always playing around with my stuff so it might be different the next time you hear it :)
Thanks for the review :)
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